Matt,
It's not my background, per say, but I like the titles better in the previous layouts / the way you have them on white. The titles over the right page seem to disappear for me, losing the section I'm in. The full images are nice to have larger like that, but the topo section line feels awkward cutting the images like that... Maybe a combo of the 2? Using the more bold titles look, over the full images? This could also be solved having section header pages (as prior), then within the sections go to the new layouts where needed?
The right page layout is looking nice, but the left page could maybe use some weight in the lower left for grounding against the right. Maybe a black box / inverted white text?
Just rough ideas. Looking great man!
-J
Jonathon Harris
Directory of Visualization Department
Karlsberger
Friday, June 5, 2009
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